I'll reply for real a bit later today since I'm pressed for time this morning. The reason you couldn't read the stoty is I missed one of the quote marks in the coding. I've fixed it but for ease, the link is here:

http://cofax7.livejournal.com/252309.html

It's very short, a scene really, but it's the sort of scene I wish we'd get. I haven't read the fic you linked but I will be as soon as I get the chance. Looks good!